Response One: The hardest part of the writing process is pre-writing. It is very difficult to put the words you premade into the actually paragraph. I struggle alot at pre arranging the sentences and words so that it will fit into the paragraph because it requires alot of thinking and brainstorming.I believe that everyone has to sometime have difficulltys with thinking and brainstorming. It requires them to take their time to make the paragraph perfect like I do.
Response Two: I believe that I can improve my writing process in many ways. Being able to focus hard and take your time at a writing process will help achieve your essays to be perfect. Taking all my focus and time into the writing process can show everyone including my teacher how determine I am too improving my writing skills. Instead of wasting my time screwing around in class and don't pay attention to my teacher only makes my writing skills worst. Towards my goal, I would focus more upon my work then anything non-related to school work.
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pnguyen,
Your post mostly follows the guidelines. Please do a quick check of spelling, and refrain from using language such as "screwing around in class." I'm sure you can rephrase that in a more school-appropriate way.
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